A Girl's got to start somewhere

Last Month I participated in an open mic night with the rest of my creative writing class. I already posted the article... Just after the War with Indians. But today, I got an email with a review of each of our articles from the editor of the San Gabriel Poetry Quarterly.

 

Here it is:

 

Third, Amy bared her soul in her composition "Just After The War With The Indians", an analysis of her maternal heritage featuring historical quotation "people traveled on foot", incredulous discovery of an old gravestone depicting her grandmother as a "capable wife" and her own self-revelation "I have never in my life made pancakes"...there is indeed "no map for this!"

 

I didn't feel like I was bearing my soul but it was kinda fun. And it's always nice when a complete stranger notices, right? I guess I'll keep writing.